got to be honest - this is not an EVE ship. It's a good looking ship all right, and I think you've done a good job, but it just doesn't match the aesthetic of any of the races of the game, least of all the Amarr.
Haven't seen the Minmatar shuttle. I've only played EVE for a few hours at my brother's house. Love the game and wish I could play but my current internet limitations doesn't allow Asked him what it looks like and he suggested the Amarr Frigate.
I've checked out the Minmatar Scuttle on Google and can see a slight resemblance in the hull, but that's about it. EvE has such a large range of ship designs it's hard to design any ship that doesn't have some resemblance to an EvE ship.